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Wednesday, 3 December 2014



Welcome to WIP IT UP Wednesday. #wipitup. M
y work in progress(WIP) today is from my cowboy spanking romance currently titled Hope Junction.  Set in the small Wyoming town of Hope Junction, it is Tessa and Chance's love story.  Tessa has just moved to town to start a new business and Chance is the local rancher who falls for her.  In this extract  Chance is undressing Tessa for the first time:

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Tessa smiled at him and nodded, taking the hand he offered.  Once inside his pick-up she was embarrassed to be hot and trembling beside him.  Smiling at her he put his arm round her and kissed her softly.  “You got any candles, hon?”
“Huh?  Candles?”  Tessa gazed at him puzzled and then blushed with passionate pleasure as she remembered his words explaining why he let her keep her panties up when she was across his knee.  …that’s not how I wanna see you bare for the first time.  Candlelight and soft, tender caresses are more my preference, babe.  She squirmed in anticipation remembering his promise.  Not as good as you want, Tessa, but better than you’ve been getting.  Tessa swallowed, her mouth dry at the implications of his question.  “Um, yeah.  Plenty.  All different types and scents.”
He smiled and nodded as he put his truck into gear.  “Thought you might.”
“Chance,” she asked into his chest.  “Do you think maybe…” what the hell, she screwed up her courage and just asked him in a rush, “…maybe you could stay over.”
He pulled her closer and kissed her hair.  “Would you like me to, Therese Marie?”
She nodded, her heart in her mouth waiting for his answer.
It came in a husky whisper.  “I’d like that too, babe.”
Tessa breathed a sigh of relief, the rest of the journey passing in a haze of anticipation.  She knew it wouldn’t be all the way, but just the idea of having him in her bed, naked together, falling asleep in his arms was heady stuff.  To finally have this after the waiting enhanced it.  Guess he knew what he was doing drawing things out.
When they pulled in to the spot behind her house, they walked hand in hand toward her bedroom in silence.  Once inside, she opened her cupboard, indicating the shelf that held her selection of candles.  “Take your pick, cowboy.”
“Don’t mind if I do.”  He told her.  Amazing Tessa by selecting her entire collection of over forty candles, he started to spread them around the room.  She watched in fascination as he chose each place carefully, clearly using his firefighter expertise to guard against accidents.  “Get lighting woman.”  He growled jolting her out of her surprise.
Together they set up the candles, creating the most romantic atmosphere Tessa had ever experienced.  When they finished, the glow was bright enough to illuminate the blatant desire in his eyes.  Taking her by the hand, he leaned lazily on her mirrored dresser and stood her in front of him slightly to the side so she was fully visible in the mirror.  Tessa melted as he ran his finger down the bridge of her nose and tucked a stray, fiery curl behind her ear.  She drew in her breath as his hand cupped her sex through her silky dress and he informed her softly.  “I’m desperate to discover if the curls here match the hair on your head or your lashes.”
She laughed sweetly and softly.  “Really?  That’s what you think about when you imagine me naked?”
“Damn, right.  Thought about it that first night when we were sitting out there on my Gram’s old couch and every night since.”  He kept his hand firmly on the apex between her thighs while he traced her lips and jaw line.  “You wanna give me a hint?”  He asked her in a low, husky growl.
She shook her head slowly, biting her lip, answering him a voice that was a slow caress.  “Guess you’ll just have to find out for yourself.”
And he did.  Little by little, one garment at a time, he bared her completely to his admiring gaze in the candlelight.  Tessa found it dizzily erotic to be bared in front of her own mirror as he remained fully clothed.  She’d undressed in front of that mirror so many times, but tonight the woman she saw was the one reflected in his eyes.  He looked at her like she was the most desirable woman on earth and so she was.
When she was completely naked before him he reached out and gently pulled on the curls nestled between her thighs.  “Flame colored like your hair, just like I hoped.  You know why, hon, because then I can watch them turn dark like your lashes when I suck on your clit and make your sweet pussy weep.”
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13 comments:

  1. I like the way this cowboy thinks! Great line to end the scene! :)

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    1. Thanks, Shelley. Yeah, he's been wondering and imagining it a few times. lol.

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  2. I am so glad I didn't miss this one. Wow... I just wanna say your excerpt this week is like a slow burn that turns into a roaring fire.
    I did a manual add of your link to the linky list. Sorry about the generic thumbnail pic.
    "Take your pick, cowboy" <-- loved that line ☺

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    1. Thanks, Melody. Got a bit hot writing this one lol! Thanks for adding me.

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  3. I'm a sucker for cowboys and westerns - this one will be on my TBR list.

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  4. OOh a slow burn erotic romance... gorgeous. Candles, teasing, cowboy... DRIBBLE. Yep, dribble. Loved it ;)

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  5. Very romantic. Love the last line. :)

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    1. Thanks, Jennifer. Chance is a romantic for sure.

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    1. Thanks Tara Hope Junction is a sexy with lots of punishment but ultimately it's a sweet romance! lol

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